hesadevilspike ([info]hesadevilspike) wrote,
@ 2007-08-01 12:16:00
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Written for: [info]writerconuk’s Bannergrab Challenge for [info]sevendeadlyfun’s banner.



Fic Specifics

Characters: Spike, Angel - check

Rating: Any - PG for language

Season: AtS S5 or post-NFA – Immediately Post NFA,

Can Have: angst, AI Team, Spike/Angel bickering - one large helping of bicker coming up

Can't Have: Buffy angst, character death, torture –I wouldn't call it angst exactly



Word count: 1750

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Take My Hand


“In terms of a plan?”

“We fight.”

“Bit more specific.”

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“Take my hand.”

“What?” Spike wiped the blood-soaked rain from his eyes and squinted upwards.

Angel hung on the edge of what was left of the Hyperion's fire escape by one hand; the other stretched out towards him.

“Bit late for that sort of specific. Not that it’d help.”

"See that?" Angel shouted over the noise of the downpour.

Spike looked towards the horde of demons sweeping relentlessly through the alley. "Yeah. Been outnumbered by the Sheriff and his posse before. Know what we do next? ‘S easy.”

“Jump!” Angel interrupted.

“Die,” Spike continued.

In the no-man’s land between the vampires and the demon horde Wolfram and Hart had unleashed on LA, a fiery chasm belched its poisonous gases into the disintegrating street. It deepened, running across the alley, toppling buildings and demons into its depths. At the junction with the main highway, it stopped.

So did the rain.

“We’re already dead – deader.” Angel nodded towards the end of the alley.

Beyond the shimmering curtain of smoke and water, Spike watched the cars speeding along the road in brilliant sunshine. Then they were gone. The sky cracked. Gigantic mountains appeared. Cliffs of sheer vertigo, pocked with valleys of deep shadow, replaced Los Angeles’ towers of steel and glass.

Apocalypse Now playing in LA,” said Spike. “Thought it’d be… I dunno – bigger.”

“We’re not in LA,” replied Angel.

Spike glanced down at the remaining stretch of alleyway just as the fissure reached his toecaps.

“Bugger.”

The ground tilted beneath his feet and slid into the widening gap. He jumped and grasped Angel's outstretched hand. “This going to work better than your last plan?”

A great shudder coursed through the Hyperion's walls. Using Spike’s momentum to carry them across the rift, Angel released his grip on the jagged metal and swung them in through an upper window of the hotel.

They crashed to the floor, rolling out of the way of the shattered window. Spike clambered to his feet and stared at the scene visible through the hole in the wall.

“Bloody Hell, Angel. You single-handedly made Armageddon.”

“You helped.”

“Me? I saved a baby. You took down the Black Thorn.”

Angel dusted dragon scales from his coat and rubbed a hand through the singed tips of his hair. “What do you mean ‘better than my last plan’?”

Spike looked at the ceiling. “ ‘10-to-1, we're gone when the smoke clears’, if I recall correctly. I signed up for total annihilation, not a weekend break in …” he glanced round the room “where are we again?”

“Hyperion Hotel. In another dimension.”

“Right. We’re stuck in the Hyperion Hotel in some hell dimension while our luggage has gone only Easyjet knows where.”

“Luggage?”

“Yeah. You forgotten Chuck and Illyria already?”

Angel squinted through the smoke-filled hole. “You’re right about one thing,” he said.

Spike raised a hopeful eyebrow.

“This must be a hell dimension if I have to listen to your incessant babbling much longer.”

"Oh, great. Stuck in a fiery hell with you for all eternity. Someone's really got it in for me." Spike left the room and sped down the stairs. "You'd think dying twice to save the world would count for something. Well bugger this. I'm off to find a cosy crater where I can hang my hat in peace.

“You don't have a hat.” Angel said following him into the hotel’s reception area.

“Coat then,” growled Spike heading for the door.

Angel grabbed the edge of Spike’s duster halting his progress across the lobby. A motionless figure barred their exit; a medieval knight, holding a clipboard in one hand, the other resting on a huge book atop a lectern.

Spike shrugged himself free and crossed the room. “Dro. What’re you doing here? Thought after Angel killed you, you'd be in the other place.”

“Spike…” Angel gestured at Drogyn’s sword propped against the stand.

“Oh, right. Battlebrand. Demonsbane. Immortal.” He grinned at Drogyn. “So, what happened? This some sort of holding dimension…”

“The fat lady has sung…” Drogyn intoned.

Spike and Angel exchanged glances.

"Sounds familiar." Spike tapped the clipboard. “What’s this, Sirk's CliffsNotes?”

“ … the Reckoning can begin,” finished Drogyn.

“Reckoning?” Spike peered at him. A shimmering hummed around Drogyn's head; a fuzzy halo pulsing with light, fading when Spike stared directly at it, brightening as he averted his gaze. Spike swung back towards Angel. “Bloody Hell, Angel, he’s an angel. It is the Apocalypse - the Finale."

The books were opened and judgement was given,” Drogyn read from the book.

Spike tilted his head and squinted at the elaborate writing on the clipboard. “So. Which way for us then?”

And I saw from the mouth of the dragon, and the mouth of the beast, unclean spirits. And they go forth to do battle.

“Unclean spirits? Yeah, right. Fiery hell then?”

Drogyn closed the book and embraced Angel.

“Welcome, brother.”

“Oh,” Spike pouted. “I get unclean spirits and he – the one who just caused the end of the world - gets the Prodigal treatment.”

“Not so. The world continues.” Drogyn released Angel and indicated the glass panel in the door. “The Reckoning will show that which you left unfinished on earth.”

“Unfinished. Pfft.” Spike snorted. “Atonement’s Angel’s gig. Just show me the way out.”

Drogyn again indicated the door.

Through the glass, Spike saw the mountains shift and fade. A pair of dark eyes gazed in at him. “Drusilla,” he breathed, reaching for the door handle. There was none. He pulled his arm back and aimed a fist at the window.

“Hold!” cried Drogyn. “You may not interfere. You may only watch and choose.”

“Hmmm.” The sound of Drusilla’s humming drifted into the lobby. “So sad. And all alone. What Miss Drusilla needs now is ….”

The screaming began. Blood spattered the pane, spots turning to a deluge of red, obscuring Spike’s view of Drusilla, and the screams stopped.

“The surviving member of the Aurelius Clan is creating a new family,” said Drogyn. “You would leave that unchallenged, vampire with a soul?”

Before Spike could reply, the glass cleared, revealing a new scene. Spike recognised the apartment in Rome in which he and Angel had met Andrew.

“Why did no one tell me?” Buffy glared at the figures gathered around her. “Why didn’t he tell me?”

Spike hurled himself at the glass, and rebounded back into the centre of the room, coming to a halt against the circular lobby bench.

“What did you see?” asked Angel holding out his hand.

“Nothin’ of interest to you,” muttered Spike, pulling himself up and ignoring Angel’s offer. “Your turn.”

Angel licked his lips nervously and stood in front of the door. In the street beyond, he saw a hunched figure approaching the hotel; a hat pulled down hiding his face.

“No place left,” sighed Lorne. He stared at Angel with red rimmed eyes. “Why me?”

“You should have let him save the baby, mate,” said Spike. “He never heard it sing.”

Angel swung round and picked Spike up by the lapels of his coat. “Always think you know people best, don’t you Spike? Wait ‘til you’ve had a soul as long as I have before you’re fit to judge.”

Spike flung his arms upward, breaking Angel’s grip, and dropped lightly to the floor. “’S nothing to do with having a soul, you great lummox.”

Drogyn’s great sword sliced the air between them. “Enough,” he said gently. “Angel, there is one more thing you must see.” He grasped Angel by the shoulder and led both vampires back to the entrance door.

The three of them stood silently watching Connor and his family packing their car and locking the house. Connor hugged his parents and picked up his backpack. “I love you guys,” he said smiling.

His mother shook her head. “Then why won’t you come with us?”

“Because I love you.” Connor shouldered his backpack and sprinted away.

“Connor.” Angel reached out and touched the window as the image faded. “The Senior Partners are after him.” He turned to Drogyn. “Because of me.”

“With you gone, he is the natural choice for revenge.” Drogyn picked the clipboard from where he’d dropped it. “The Reckoning is over. Now the Choosing.”

“Um. Did I miss the memo?” interrupted Spike. “Why’s the boy the natural choice for revenge?”

Angel sank into an armchair. “Connor’s my son,” he choked.

Spike put his hands on his hips and looked speechlessly down at Angel’s crumpled form.

“There is no time for explanations,” said Drogyn. “You each must choose whether to go onwards to your reward or back to continue the fight.

“No contest.” Spike’s head snapped up. “I know what’s waiting for me and it’s not the hero’s kind of reward.”

“In that, you are mistaken,” said Drogyn. “For you have rightly earned your place among the champions.”

Angel took his hands from his face and looked anxiously at Drogyn.

“What’re you looking so worried about, Champ?” said Spike. “Seems you’ve earned the Shanshu thingamabob.”

“I don’t want it,” Angel snapped. He rose from the chair. “I want to go back and help Lorne and Connor. How can I do that if…”

“You really are a thickheaded Irishman,” snorted Spike. “Don’t you get it yet? You got the Shanshu…” he rolled his eyes and bounced his head in time to the numbers he mouthed as he calculated. “17 years ago, judging by appearances.”

“17 years?” Angel frowned.

“Connor, you dunderhead!” thundered Spike. “He is the Shanshu. Don’t know how you did it, but you fathered a human.”

Angel’s features relaxed. He grinned and punched Spike on the jaw, sending him reeling against the lectern. The great book tumbled to the floor, disintegrating into dust as it hit the terrazzo.

“What’d you do that for?” asked Spike rubbing his face.

“Calling me a dunderhead.” He offered Spike his hand.

Spike took it and allowed Angel to pull him to his feet. “So. It’s back to fight the good fight together then?

'”You are a good friend,” commented Drogyn opening the door.

"Not bloody likely. I like my friends," chortled Spike. He turned to Angel. "I'll probably never like you."

"I'm family. No-one likes family."

"I did."

"Darla always said you were an idiot."

"Says the Bog-trotter."

"Sassenach."

"Poof."

"Take my hand."

Spike raised an eyebrow and did as he was asked.

They stared into the rift for a moment - and jumped.



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[info]hils
2007-08-01 11:19 am UTC (link)
That was great! Just the sort of thing I'd like to see post NFA

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-01 05:31 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a bugger to write.

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[info]petzipellepingo
2007-08-01 11:52 am UTC (link)
“You’re right about one thing,” he said.
Spike raised a hopeful eyebrow.
“This must be a hell dimension if I have to listen to your incessant babbling much longer.”
"Oh, great. Stuck in a fiery hell with you for all eternity. Someone's really got it in for me.
"snorfle"
I know what’s waiting for me and it’s not the hero’s kind of reward.”
“In that, you are mistaken,” said Drogyn. “For you have rightly earned your place among the champions.”
"snuggles you for that one"
Just what I would love to see in Season Six. Snark and bickering while saving the world. Great job.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-01 05:32 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Snark and bickering were the easy bit, it's the saving the world that gave me the most trouble.

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[info]seductivembrace
2007-08-01 12:19 pm UTC (link)
“Bloody Hell, Angel. You single-handedly made Armageddon.”

“You helped.”

“Me? I saved a baby. You took down the Black Thorn.”


This really struck me as funny. LOL. I can so see Spike saying this. I really enjoyed this. Nicely done conclusion - of sorts - to NFA, the boys going back to fight the good fight.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-01 05:33 pm UTC (link)
That was the first thing I wrote and from then on, the ficlet had to go down the humourous route.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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[info]lillianmorgan
2007-08-01 12:54 pm UTC (link)
Lovely, crackling, interesting banter between the two of them - and a great entrance by Drogyn. Very clever :)
Liked how you paced this too - from the intensity of NFA to the calm of this moment where the fic takes place (aside from Spike's asides *g*) and back out again, keeping on with the fight.
Connor! Eeepy.
Spike looked towards the horde of demons sweeping relentlessly through the alley. "Yeah. Been outnumbered by the Sheriff and his posse before. Know what we do next? ‘S easy.”

“Jump!” Angel interrupted.

“Die,” Spike continued.

Heeeeeee! Very nice :) Enjoyed that!

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-01 05:37 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

I have to admit to stealing a few ideas (Connor and Drusilla) from Soul Searching to overcome the writer's block (Drogyn's appearance was always planned but I took the description from SS) and move the plot forward.

I wanted the feel of this one to be like the scene where Fred and Wes are killing bugs with a flame thrower and Spike and Angel are bickering - a light 'interlude' before resuming the serious business of saving the world again.

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[info]shinodabear
2007-08-01 06:44 pm UTC (link)
Me? I saved a baby. You took down the Black Thorn.”

I love the infusion of humor in the NFA setting. Of course, the banter is always a treat --- and never-ending. :)

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-01 07:43 pm UTC (link)
Thank you.

I'll probably put it on [info]gen_storyteller at some stage.

the banter is always a treat --- and never-ending.
Like the fight itself, it's what defines Spike for me.

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[info]curiouswombat
2007-08-01 06:56 pm UTC (link)
Excellent.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-01 07:43 pm UTC (link)
*beams*

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[info]bogwitch
2007-08-01 10:13 pm UTC (link)
Very good! That'd make a nice neat resolution.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-02 08:12 am UTC (link)
Thanks. I like to think this is the sort of thing that would lead into whatever Joss planned for Season 6.

Is yours ready yet?

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[info]bogwitch
2007-08-02 11:36 am UTC (link)
Nope. I'm ripping it up and starting again.

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[info]lilithbint
2007-08-01 11:17 pm UTC (link)
oh well done,
this was brilliant and funny,
love the use of the hold my hand line that was an excellent bridge.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-02 08:14 am UTC (link)
Many thanks. I tried to stick closely to the Fic Specifics and the images on the banner as I was plotting the ficlet.

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[info]myfeetshowit
2007-08-01 11:54 pm UTC (link)
The best of the bicker. I love these two in this kind of scenario. You did good! See, sometimes just writing it is the best way to do it.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-02 08:20 am UTC (link)
Thanks. Spike could bicker for England in the Bickering Olympics.

sometimes just writing it is the best way to do it.
The writing threatened to run away and turn it into a much longer fic. I think that is one reason I left it so close to the deadline before finishing it, so I wouldn't have time to do another 'LA Times'.

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[info]elisi
2007-08-02 09:25 am UTC (link)
I have *so* much love for this! Wonderful scenario, perfect voices, excellent ending. Just brilliant!

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-02 10:17 am UTC (link)
::blushes:: Aw, thank you.

Mind if I swipe that icon and change its colours to use with this ficlet? It's more fitting than the one I made in a rush just before posting.

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[info]elisi
2007-08-02 12:15 pm UTC (link)
Oooh it worked! (internet still being v. impossible)

Mind if I swipe that icon and change its colours to use with this ficlet?
The icon is by [info]amavel_bel so you'd have to ask her, but I can't imagine that she'd mind. And I did think that it fitted v. nicely when I selected it. :)

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-02 03:26 pm UTC (link)
I've emailed her and await a reply.

Internet is buggering my attempts to upgrade my Fickr account but otherwise it's working fine for me.

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[info]thedeadlyhook
2007-08-03 03:12 am UTC (link)
Oh, I love this. Drogyn being the one to greet them at the edge of the final Reckoning is just fabulous. And the banter is perfect.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-03 11:07 am UTC (link)
Drogyn being the one to greet them at the edge of the final Reckoning is just fabulous.
He got that promotion he'd been working towards ;)

Thank you!

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[info]adjovi
2007-08-03 01:25 pm UTC (link)
Hey there...visiting from over at fanfiction--you had recommended I check out your LJ to see the banner--and you're right! It is just lovely. :)

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-03 02:39 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you thought it was worth the trip, thanks for dropping by.

I wondered where I'd seen your name before - it must have been on one of my Flist's LJ.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-03 02:42 pm UTC (link)
It was on one of my Flist's LJ. [info]kellyhk helped with the American football research for a chapter in 'Family'.

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[info]adjovi
2007-08-03 02:54 pm UTC (link)
I friended you, so now you're on my f-list. :) And, if you have any questions about American football, sadly I am kind of a super-fan, so could probably help you out.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-03 03:40 pm UTC (link)
I am kind of a super-fan
So's [info]kellyhk and I hope never to need either of you experts ever again. Writing one scene set at an American football game was enough for one fanfic writer's lifetime.

I friended you back and when I've more time (after [info]writerconuk's Midimeet is over), intend to read your latest fic.

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[info]adjovi
2007-08-03 03:49 pm UTC (link)
thanks for friending me! actually, my latest fic is "survival instinct". i am kinda clueless when it comes to LJ, and that is the second one i posted even though it is the most recent one that i've written. i am looking forward to reading your take on american football this weekend! :)

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-03 03:54 pm UTC (link)
i am looking forward to reading your take on american football this weekend! :)
I hope you've lots of time to spare, 'Family: Blood Calls to Blood' (it's also the first thing I wrote and I've left it unedited as a record of how much progress I've made over the years) is a very long fic and the football scene is quite a way in.

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[info]pjgale
2007-08-03 09:26 pm UTC (link)
This is the best post NFA fic I've ever read. (:

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-03 09:33 pm UTC (link)
You're too kind.

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[info]pjgale
2007-08-03 09:28 pm UTC (link)
Can I please be friended? (:

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-03 09:33 pm UTC (link)
Of course, friend away.

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[info]pjgale
2007-08-04 12:36 am UTC (link)
How could I have missed you fic? I'm reading it now and am right into it. Fab! (:

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[info]hesadevil
2007-08-04 01:35 am UTC (link)
Thank you. I've been around a long time but am not that well known in the fandom, probably because I write genfic.

I haven't answered the request to join [info]whenthemuse because all posts are public. I made a mistake setting it up as a community. If you're reading there, you'll find a lot missing. Try my website Soul Searching

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[info]darkspace99
2007-08-04 05:35 am UTC (link)
Wonderful! The voices were spot on. Angel and Spike back as Champions. Holding hands too. *sighs dreamily*

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-04 10:39 am UTC (link)
Many thanks.

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[info]of_too_minds
2007-08-04 04:09 pm UTC (link)
That was excellent. Love the snark, very Spike-and-Angel. And of course they both choose to return to the fight. :)

The banner's great, btw. Very pretty.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-04 04:15 pm UTC (link)
Thank you.

of course they both choose to return to the fight. :)
There was never any doubt in my mind, I just had to convince Spike of that fact.

The banner's great, btw. Very pretty.
But of course, given the pretty vampires who feature. [info]sevendeadlyfun is very talented.

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[info]thismaz
2007-08-07 01:47 pm UTC (link)
Nice banter. This - "Right. We’re stuck in the Hyperion Hotel in some hell dimension while our luggage has gone only Easyjet knows where." made me smile and then the next line gave it a bitter edge, that sounded very right coming from Spike's mouth.
Of course they went back. They had to, if they were given the choice.
Very nice.

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-07 04:44 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. You're the only person to mention the Easyjet reference.

the next line gave it a bitter edge, that sounded very right coming from Spike's mouth.

It doesn't do Angel any harm to hear that he so easily overlooks the fate of his friends.

Looking forward to meeting you this coming weekend.

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[info]kazzy_cee
2007-08-07 03:32 pm UTC (link)
Super post season 5 snark. I like it very much! :D

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-07 04:46 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I was so relieved when the Muse returned firing on all snark-cylinders in the final hours before publication.

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[info]fredsmith518
2007-08-14 12:10 pm UTC (link)
very well done
I love the vibe you catch between Spike and Angel

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[info]hesadevilspike
2007-08-14 07:12 pm UTC (link)
Thank you.

The vibe was quite subtle onscreen and I try to replicate that in my writing.

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[info]fredsmith518
2007-08-14 07:34 pm UTC (link)
I should have written, more accurately, I always love the vibe you catch between Spike and Angel as it does reflect that shown on screen, but maybe peels back some layers too:

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